ok so i made a new deviantation about these 2 boys who go to my school i hope to make it long (in chapters) but i dont think its going that well please comment i may have added a few fake parts well a lot actully but any who tell me if you like

if the gate is closed,
it means KEEP OUT,
the dog will bite,
there is no doubt,
so if you enter,
you can try to move fast,
for the pain you'll feel,
will be in your A_ _.