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henryxbrandon yaoi story pt. 1 by ~inuyashas7girlfriend:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:



  Henry awoke, slamming his fist to the annoying alarm clock braking it "dangit, that's my 4th this month!, oh well, better get up". as Henry got up his big sister Nani called him for breakfast. they were having sausage, eggs, grits, and orange juice. Henry just made a piece of plain toast and drank some orange juice. he was anorexic, and his doctor told his big sister (the only one living with him, considering his parents died in a mall shooting) that he should eat healthy or he would get sick. "honestly do you ever listen to your doctor?" she said washing her hands, then smiling, flicking a little water at him."now go wash your hands, and get ready for school". he grumbled a little then went to do as he was told. after his shower he went to his room wrapped in a towel. he started to rummage through his dresser then hit something hard "aw, this old thing? it must have fallen in here" it was a picture of him and his best friend, Brandon. he was already dripped dry from just standing there. "are you getting ready?" Nani shouted from down stairs. he quickly grabbed a blue pair of jeans, then a pink Hollister shirt, with his regular skating shoes, even though he did not skate board. "yeah, don't come up yet" he said hurrying to get them on. he then packed his stuff, which included an ipod, change of cloths for gem, paper and pencil , and set of 3 keys (home, club house, and locker). "k I'm ready", he said coming down stairs, brushing his baby smooth hair, then putting the come in his book bag. he then ran out the door and got on the bus, which came early.

when he finally got to school, he jumped of the bus and went to the table he and Brandon usually went too every day. the only thing wrong was Brandon wasn't there, which was strange, considering Brandon was a car rider, so he usually got to school before Henry. "he's probley just late" Henry decided to go check any ways. he first went to the car loop, but he wasn't there so he then went to the breakfast room, he was there but he was eating breakfast talking to Julie, the most popular girl in the school. "why is he eating breakfast with her?" Henry thought to himself. he then got a pain in his chest, but it didn't hurt like a wound what was it? he just then walked away not wanting to see it. Brandon saw him, then got up and went out of the lunch room after him. "hey man, whats up?" Henry just turned around. "why were you eating with her?" he asked with a questioning look. "because shes my girlfriend. wait didn't i tell you that already?" he said with a smile, which soon faded when he saw Henry's face "no" Henry said with an aggressive tone. "hey man, no need to be mad, i just forgo-, wait... are you so mad... because you ...like her to?" he said with a smirk growing. "NO, i would never like a dumb blond like her!" he said running towards the bus loop. the bell then rang and Brandon went to class .
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Author's Comments

ok so its not yaoi yet but the second part will be :) well this is my first yaoi story so it kinda sucked. i couldnt find the right category so its not a fan-fic in anime these are 2 boys i know that i think would make a cute couple plus there both close friends with each other. but anywho i hope to make this long if im not to lazy :). i dont own henry or brandon they are real people (but i wish i did there both hot lol). please comment i take any kind good or bad. (those who dont like yaoi (gay,boyxboy,same sex relationship)then dont read simple as that you were warned) :) hope you like. and again please comment.

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:iconyuri-no-hana:
it's cute.
send me the rest of it when your done.
AND DON'T BE LIKE ME AND STOP HALFWAY THROUGH!
chu~ :aww:
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
lol ok well i just made another part you can go check it know it kind of longer. and thanx this is my first.

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:iconokaron:
This is pretty well written. You have good detail and they way your characters talk actually seems like how young people would talk to each other. I am a little sad that the main character is anorexic....is that something that will come into the story or is it just a random detail about the character? The reason I ask is that when you describe him as such I picture someone who is very sickly and not healthy and I wonder if that was your intention?

I think your premise for the story is a good one. Boy's best friend/love interest gets girl friend---that makes me want to read more :D So I am off to the second part :D

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A dream left to rot in the recesses of our minds does not die, but eats away at our souls like a cancer.
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
thanx. no actully it was just a detail but i didnt think of that (your the one who gets let in on this secret) i might use that as a sad story in the up coming ones and ill make shur to mention you for the idea of somthing happening can i use it? but hes not to much skinny like dieing verge but you can see his bones pop from his ribs but not to much.

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:icongoregeousss:
I like it a lot so far. I'm going to transfer Microsoft Word to your computer soon so you can edit the writing here. I love it.
:iconokaron:
I not sure of what you think I came up with...this is all yours lol. I certainly don't want the whole world to know about my past, so you can leave me out of the credits. Great story and keep it up! Creative endevors are their own reward, but who knows....maybe one day you can make a living at it :D And that would be pretty sweet :heart:

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A dream left to rot in the recesses of our minds does not die, but eats away at our souls like a cancer.
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
ok yeah and thanx

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
thanx char char

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
i did this with an on screen key boiard so i cant mess up
and i did this on note pad

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me

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