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I do drugs,
because I love getting high.
If im deppressed,
I either cut or cry.
People say im gay,
I'm actully bi.
I tell the truth,
but my whole life is a lie.
I wont wear a suit,
but I'll wear a tie.
When people laugh,
I want to die.

I love my friends,
but they dont care.
I have black and messy,
self-cut hair.
When I walk,
people stare.
I think two guys,
make a pair.
Without MySpace,
I cannot bare.
When I get dumped,
my heart will tear.

In my hair,
I wear a bow.
My name is Mary,
my friends call me Moe.
People all around me,
friend or foe?
I suck at school,
my mom says I'm [mentally] slow.
When I get hurt,
my feelings show.

Your's saddly,
signed emo.
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:

Author's Comments

Humerous. Personal observation, not meant to offend.

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:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
my first deviantation and im not making fun of emos i am one

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
someone please comment.

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:iconokaron:
Oh, that is funny! and saddly true... Great poem....I don't often read poetry on DA, because most of it is overly dramatic emo crap, but this caught my eye and gave me a smile :D

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A dream left to rot in the recesses of our minds does not die, but eats away at our souls like a cancer.
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
thanx it was going to be based off me but i decided to add some more stuff so this is not me really.

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
p.s. my name is not really mary that in my opinion is ugly exept for mary ann i know someone with that name.

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:iconlivebleeddie:
wow. um...intersting poem. So are u mocking ppl like that or are u trying to describe how they are?
Intresting, pretty good so far. Keep up the great work.

Many poems don't usually make eveything ryhme, it should come more from the heart instead of trying to make everything ryhme, for example my poems, and many people on da, have a more common or unique way of writting poems, instead of using this kind of poem u learn early on in school.

But still pretty good. :)

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"Some people live their lives while others just survive, I chose to live my life so I struggle and strive, Walk another mile and I stile simle" -Jester, Short Stories, Live My Life.
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
i wasnt moking it just for fun so im not really trying to make it like really from the heart but thanx i love comments

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me
:icondarkside915:
Lawl. XD It's hilarious! Especially the line about myspace. LMAO!!!! XDDDD It, huh, would make a good parody theme song. X) I don't have anything against Emo kids in general, as I like some of the music myself. :3 Just...some of them take it rather too far. D: I mean, if one's life is friggin' awesome, stop pretending to be depressed...<-__-; I speak from a, hmm...position of knowledge about true depression and shit-tastic life. XD

An, ah, I personally like poems that rhyme. D: Ones that don't, never keep my attention and seem more like a skrewed up story with lack of plot to me. XD So I like your style. :3 And I like your sense of humor. too. ;) Keep up the good work, mate. 8D

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Never say Forever,
because Forever only lasts as long as right now.
In a minute.
A second.
A single solitary moment.
Forever can so easily turn into Yesterday.
:iconinuyashas7girlfriend:
thanx i love your sig

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If you can't understand my silence you will never understand my words ~unknown
this just fits with me

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